A QUICK -ING WORD TUTORIAL
Every once in a while, I run across a newish writer who has been told to rid her manuscript of -ing words. Sure, you want to use them correctly and moderation, but to ban them all together is ludicrous. Not all -ing words are alike. Here is a brief tutorial explaining all the different types of -ing words and how best to use them.
VERB TENSE
Past progressive: I was going to the store when Hortencia smacked me upside the head with her Coach bag.
Past perfect progressive: I had been wanting to buy a Coach bag for a long time.
Present progressive: I am going to buy a Coach bag as soon as I sell my 20 acres of rutabagas.
Present perfect progressive: I have been growing rutabagas for as long as I can remember.
PARTICIPLE — A participle is a verb that is used as an ADJECTIVE. It usually ends in -ing or -ed.
The barking dog kept me awake all night.
Frightened, I pressed my back against the wall.
*** You need to be sure you place your participle or participle phrase NEXT to the word it modifies. Otherwise, you’ll have a dangling participle or misplaced modifier, and people will laugh at you. ****
GERUND — a verb ending in -ing that is used as a noun. I’ve already given examples above.
GERUNDS and PARTICIPLES are examples of VERBALS. A verbal is a verb that moonlights as some other part of speech. The other well known VERBAL is an INFINITIVE. An infinitive consists of the word “to” and a verb. INFINITIVES may be used as a noun, adjective or adverb. You shouldn’t split infinitives — that means to jam some other word between the to and the verb.
For more information go here: OWL Purdue Online Writing Lab
If you still aren’t convinced of the importance of -ing words, please read the poem below.
swimming trunks, or smoking guns.
You’d have to give up all debunking,
herding llamas, and spelunking.
Multi-tasking would be over.
You couldn’t dance while picking clover.